Admiration put into words (revised)

My love, please forgive my adoration; it drives me to create new images of delicate angles gleaned from the images of you that inspire me to put words alongside side one another in just the right way in order to rightly convey the beautiful square of your jawline which frames the wonderful flesh of your lips which speak the sweetest sentiments and whispers to me seducing suggestions of leisure activities such as horizontal dances that produce drops of sweet smelling sebaceous secretions that fill the night air with a fragrance akin to the essence of desire that brings out of me a willing participant to your wildest dreams, or the answer to everything that ails you.

I turned in my free verse poem about my D once I added the extra words to make it a 100 word sentence. Professor gave me some great comments and critiques! The preceding is my final result.


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